So close but yet so far (Imitation of Letter to My Mother, Sixteen Years after the fact)
I think it's time to tell you my plans.
No mom, I'm not having a baby,
Nor am I getting married.
At least for right now I'm not.
Mom, I want to prosper.
I want to be someone some day.
I want to graduate college,
and not work in factory all day.
You say you love me and that you care about me,
But why not show me?
Ask me about girls,
Talk to me more.
Tell me about what is right and what is wrong.
Mom, I long for you to know my dreams and goals,
My troubles, and my worries.
I just want to share my feelings with you.
Someday of course.
In Todd Davis' poem, Letter to My Mother, Sixteen Years after the fact, he shares an experience from his youth. This poem talks about his mother and the relationship with her. She warns Todd about all the bad things that he shouldn't do. This tells the reader that his mom really worries and cares about him. This poem made me reflect on the relationship that I have with my mother and this led to my imitation of this poem. Unlike Todd Davis, my mother and I are close at times but most of the time we are strangers. This happens because when we talk, we always end up talking about her problems. We never have a calm and relax talk with one another.
Bibliography
Davis, Todd. Some Heaven. East Lansing: Michigan State University Press, 2007. Print.
"Goshen College | Healing the world, peace by peace." Goshen College | Healing the world, peace by peace. N.p., n.d. Web. 28 Mar. 2013. <http://www.goshen.edu>.
Hostetler, Ann Elizabeth. A cappella: Mennonite voices in poetry. Iowa City: University of Iowa Press, 2003. Print.
Links
http://www.personal.psu.edu/tfd3/http://www.bucknell.edu/x70554.xml
http://thisisantler.com/2012/05/interview-todd-davis/